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This could have been great because the concept has potential. However, your execution completely lacks any semblance of effort. Put in some time into this concept and I promise it will get better reception. As for this, it has to go.

Though the animation of the employee was actually pretty well done, there is no substance to the cartoon unfortunately and cannot give a higher score based on that. Though I personally don't like the combination of vector and bitmap graphics in animations, yours didn't come off as particularly annoying (save for the Gamestop storefront in the intro, doesn't look good with a heavily pixelated zoom effect). I would venture a guess that a more complete release by you would probably come out pretty good. Overall - D

Very, very well done detailed, colorful and multilayered animation, though I have a few gripes:
* the scenes with the armies could stand to have some differentiation amongst its members, just to help with viewer immersion.
* Though the ninja fly had excellent fluid animations, the other characters did not, particularly the ladybugs.
Excellent work overall - A

Rezeile responds:

Thanks for your great imput....I gave myself a time limit to do the whole thing.....So some character animation suffered for it....Thanks again!!

LOL I always hated that pseudo-Napoleon from RE4! Great animation flow and style, I appreciated the attention to sync the voice with the animation. The music complements the comedic effect really well. Hilarious parody - A

Eyelids-pie responds:

thanks alot!
i always loved that little man
i want all my babies to be him

Really well done 3D animation, nice vibrant use of color. Some of the movements were a bit stiff, but forgiveable. Overall Great - A

HYSTERICAL! The animation was pretty good as well, I especially loved the extreme facial expressions, though it could stand a little bit of refining. Your entire concept of Smokey was brilliantly implemented, including that flashback. The voice overs were generally well done as well. Keep up the amazing work! Overall Fantastic - A+

kalabor106 responds:

I think Smokey's new saying to not start forest fires would work better now days. Thanks for the kind words, and the review ;)

Excellent animation and art style, great voiceovers and a hilarious jab at the current trends in the gaming industry (my favorite being the mocking of the war game genre haha). Excellent work - A

Although I wish there was more to this, it did crack me up, having been destroyed by cats in the past for my affection. The animation was ok, and I like the effort in the background and scenery. Overall OK - C

Excellent animation style, design and fluidity, and the content isn't bad (loved the guy they interview). The vocals felt kind of forced at several points though, and the recording quality could use a some levels adjustment. Overall OK - B

Great attention to Kirby's movements for the sake of authenticity, nicely animated and I love the use of the game sound effects. Its unfortunate it's only this long. Overall Great - B+

FknSmexyHero responds:

yea im just learning how to flash and thnx i playes and studied kirby for a while to do this
and yea ill make a longer kirby flash next time

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