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This really is a unique and engaging story! I also like your mostly B&W minimalist style. Top notch voice work as well. Overall - A

Amazingly well done sprite animation that is complemented perfectly by Wolfgun's music. You've managed to bypass the limitations of sprites to convey both the emotional turbulence Lolo is experiencing and the powerful message of the story in a way that I rarely get to see in animations at all, let alone a sprite-based one. Also great use of perspective and scenery for immersion factor. Overall - A+

The fact that there is other unimaginitive work uploaded here is not an excuse to contribute to the "crowd". If you really had artistic ability, it would be so much more respectful if you led by good example rather than followed the crowd that nobody with a valuable opinion actually respects. Upload here when your "shit is solid gold", and I'd be willing to give you a fair look. But this waste has to go.

Although it could still use some work overall, execution of your intention was incredibly well done. Good matching of mouth motions to vocals, though the sound quality does need some help. The arm wave of dismissal was key to establishing the non-chalant attitude the character had towards the game. Then the quick smile at the end was a cherry on top. I absolutely empathized with the magnitude of fear that is instilled in the player by this game, which intrigued me to actually see for myself.
So, I also want to thank you for introducing me to a game that just made the sedative industry a lot of money, because I'll never sleep again with my own free will. God bless you for making it to 15 minutes. 10 minutes in, I got up, turned on my lights, closed my window despite the heat, and am preparing my camera for the dawn I'm about to view. Its a good thing I stopped there and not aimed for longer, or I'd be ready to make Bayer some dough as well.
Whoever is reading this can trust my words. If you want to feel a fear that is quite effective in launching you headfirst into near-panic, then by all means try this game. In fact I recommend it because there really isn't much out there like this. Oh and play it in the dark with really good headphones. And then you'll understand.
Ok so as for the review, this is an A. Impressive work man.

Oh and for whoever is reading, the link for the pc game has a space in between the i and the p in /zip/, which needs to be removed to get the link working, if you're having that trouble.
And enter "www.4shared.com" at the Bugmenot dot com website if you're having trouble downloading due to login fyi.

df36367 responds:

wow, thanks for the review. i totally understand the sound problem but with my lack of budget i didn't know what was worse a screeching noise or the somewhat quiet sound byte.
or maybe ill just talk louder next time, thank you again

Thank God. The whole ban week thing was a crock of shit.

VioletVulpine responds:

You just have bad taste.

There's not too much to this animation, but great job with the mouth animation matching the vocals. Keep it up, you have talent. Overall OK - C-

edrubio5 responds:

Thanks :D

Excellent animation, I love your style and *wow* what artistic vision you have! Especially that ending! Fluid motions and great use of perspective, and the PERFECT soundtrack choice. Impressive work! I would give it a full 5, but I feel you could easily up the ante in your next animation as there is still some room for improvement in art detail. Between this and Ayatori, now I'm definitely looking forward to more! Overall awesome - A

Really nicely done animation. Super smooth transitions and lots of variety to the patterns and shapes. I also like that the color changing background has its own pace. It has such a mesmerizing effect too, this would probably be even more amazing with a well chosen soundtrack. I really like this though. Overall Excellent - A

Animation not bad albeit way too short and lacking substance. The sound quality hurts the ears, needs much better leveling. Overall meh - D

The artwork and concept are good, though the voiceover quality was pretty average. There are quite a few graphical glitches throughout the animation (random horizontal lines) and got a bit distracting at certain points. Overall OK - C+

LessThanNormal responds:

Hopefully with taking care of those glitches and a better voice we can make it a B- in the future...maybe even pisu for a B ^^

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