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This really is a unique and engaging story! I also like your mostly B&W minimalist style. Top notch voice work as well. Overall - A

Amazingly well done sprite animation that is complemented perfectly by Wolfgun's music. You've managed to bypass the limitations of sprites to convey both the emotional turbulence Lolo is experiencing and the powerful message of the story in a way that I rarely get to see in animations at all, let alone a sprite-based one. Also great use of perspective and scenery for immersion factor. Overall - A+

There's not too much to this animation, but great job with the mouth animation matching the vocals. Keep it up, you have talent. Overall OK - C-

edrubio5 responds:

Thanks :D

Really nicely done animation. Super smooth transitions and lots of variety to the patterns and shapes. I also like that the color changing background has its own pace. It has such a mesmerizing effect too, this would probably be even more amazing with a well chosen soundtrack. I really like this though. Overall Excellent - A

The artwork and concept are good, though the voiceover quality was pretty average. There are quite a few graphical glitches throughout the animation (random horizontal lines) and got a bit distracting at certain points. Overall OK - C+

LessThanNormal responds:

Hopefully with taking care of those glitches and a better voice we can make it a B- in the future...maybe even pisu for a B ^^

LOOONG time Newgrounds lurker, finally decided to join and share. Love you all. I write music in FL Studio 10, export for upload @ 44000Hz/24bit. Most of my music pops in my head uncontrollably at random moments. Enjoy my brain junk!

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