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What an excellent use of perspective throughout this trip. And I loved the way you matched the animation to the intensity of the music. I was really sad that the ending was incomplete, but I read your comments, and won't let that affect my score even though you procrastinated. Overall: Radical - A

This made me lol

A well drawn animation, but definitely could stand to evolve. Definitely add some more color into your next one, it'll really help your drawing ability to stand out.

Also work on adding some more subject matter into your animations whether it be parody, a series or even a longer animation like this one, just with more content. Voice acting isn't even totally necessary if you choose to imply your subject through well placed facial expressions and actions/body language of the characters.

In any case, you definitely have talent, keep it up. Overall Good C+

deXXaReDD responds:

I use no color on it as a unique style. Thanks anyway for the advice.

This was some hilarious stuff here. Great parody, well done voiceovers and sound. The animation was good, but could use some refining. Overall Great - A

If you are as old as I'm thinking you are, then this is great work. It reminds me of when I was that age and used to do things of this sort with tape recorders and my old Macintosh Performa. Keep working on getting more action and fluidity to your animations, because that'll help capture the attention of the viewers more easily. You could even try to incorporate random close up facial expressions at random moments in the animation, to mix it up a bit. Because it gets a bit boring when the characters just sit there motionless for long periods of time, detracting from what could be a much better animation. Additionally, work on getting better sound out of your sound recording. Do some research on this, you might just need a better mic. Anyone who blams this might be just a bit ignorant to the fact that this is a kid pursuing his passion.
If you are as old as I think you are, then you keep on pursuing what you're enjoying, you got a bright future. Overall Good C+

I just wanted you to know that I've watched this at least once EVERY DAY since I discovered it about 2 months ago. I've also shown it to quite a few people and the reception has consistently been very positive, even when they were completely confused by what's going on in the animation haha
This is my clear favorite movie of any I've ever seen on the site. And on top of everything, the song is really damn catchy. Good stuff Mr. Lobster A++

Wow! This was way way better than I ever expected from the outset. This is not just another stick figure animation! Excellent use of background soundtrack and sound effects to really accentuate the action taking place in the animation. I was captivated the entire ride. Overall outstanding - A+

Exceptional art style! I really loved the way this looked, great use of color, shadow and highlights. Funny throughout, I definitely can relate to the humor in this (especially the hats part haha) and the voice acting was pretty damn good. Overall Great work - B+

LOOONG time Newgrounds lurker, finally decided to join and share. Love you all. I write music in FL Studio 10, export for upload @ 44000Hz/24bit. Most of my music pops in my head uncontrollably at random moments. Enjoy my brain junk!

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